Tuesday, 27 September 2016

Pitch Feedback

Here are a few points which we thought were useful to improve our promo:

-To make sure its a conceptual based video rather than solely a narrative
-To definitely include the deterioration of a rose
- As for the ending - not to have them meet in either the studio or the bridge, but a completely different location to emphasise that they're place of isolation is not going to be intruded by the other character




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